Reading Notes: Southwestern and California Legends, Part B
Southwestern and California Legends:
- A very long time ago, the bluebird was an extremely ugly color
- But, the bluebird knew of a lake that wasn't connected to a river or had a source that flowed into or out of it
- For four mornings, the bluebird would bathe in the lake four times
- While he bathed, he would sing a magic song like this:
- There is a blue water
- It lies there
- I went in
- I am all blue
- After bathing on the fourth morning, shed all of his ugly feathers and came out of the lake with just his skin
- After bathing and singing the next morning, however, the bird emerged from the lake with bright blue feathers
(Mountain bluebird. Source: Wikimedia Commons)
- During this entire time, the Coyote was watching the bluebird closely
- He wanted to eat her, however was afraid of the water (much like in the story before)
- On that last morning when the bluebird emerged with her beautiful feathers, the coyote asked her how she lost all of her ugly colors and now was a beautiful blue
- He continued saying that she was the most beautiful thing, even more beautiful than anything that flies in the air
- He said that he wanted to be blue too
- At this time, the Coyote was a bright green color (green with envy)
- The bluebird explained to the coyote that she only went into the lake on four different mornings four times
- The bluebird also taught the coyote the song that she sang
- So, the coyote did as the bird has described
- He bathed four times and on the fifth time, he came out of the lake as blue as the bird was
- This color change made the coyote very proud
- He walked along and looked around him on every side to see if anybody was admiring his bright blue color and his beauty
- He even looked to see if his shadow was blue
- The coyote was so concerned with others seeing and admiring his beauty that he didn't pay attention as he walked on the trail
- So, he ran into a stump in the ground and it threw him into the dirt, covering him with dirt and dust
- This is why coyotes are the color of dirt
Hi Lindsay! I loved how you used a very structured and organized style to take your notes. Usually, I just write my notes in long paragraphs. I feel like when retelling your story, this serves as a great source to gain inspiration. This method allows you to carefully follow the plot and decide, based on that, where you want to deviate from the original version. I am going to use this strategy, thanks to you, when writing my next reading notes. I also love how after you introduce a character, you indent, making it easy to follow each player's action within the plot. Fantastic job!
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